Broken Headphones
Cool song; kind of wistful in a way. A lot of interesting ideas thrown all around in your mix and the tone of the rhythm guitar part(s) is very tasteful. The percussion struck me as a little bit too dry for the mix. I think your song would provide a good backdrop for an artistic film.
Drums are a tad dry, and the whole mix could use a high end boost… Try around a 3db boost around 8K or so. I’d also like to hear a stronger bass part.
Still, this is very good, and I agree with ksdb about this being suited for a film. I likey.