…definitely not my usual thing so a big SORRY.
I’ve been looking lately at writing commercial pop as there may be a better chance of a publishing deal.
I was quite proud of this…aimed at UK boybands and for the 13 - 19 age range…its not a finished song from a writing perspective…I just wanted a go at POP…however a pal of mine says it sounds dated…
Is it time to go back to the drawing board?
(Some of the lyrics are lame I know but as I said it aint a finished song…)
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11144793
Constructive thoughts appreciated!!!
Craig
Nice one, Craig - it’s all there.
I suspect the “dated” tag comes from the Euro feel - Enrique would do it justice;-)
The song is great and so is the track but, together, I’m not sure that it’s hitting the UK vibe your after?
(what do I know;-)
If your target/focus group is 11-15 year old girls you have hit on your hands!
It sounds great.
Yeah maybe some of the lyrics are a bit schmaltsy, but they fit and work.
I think its cool you are exploring…Go for it.
Duff
Good stuff chaps 
I’m nearer to where I wanted to be than I thought I was then…
I’m trying to find an area I’m comfortable in. 
Cheers