Wait - which link should I listen to?
Craig, adding my little input, here.
The song is fabulous, and the second mix is definitely stronger. I would keep the drums where you have them, but add a little bottom end in the EQ to bring your kick up in the mix.
The vocals are perfect, but if it were me, I might add the slightest amount of reverb to them, make them sound a little fatter in the mix.
One other thing, and I may be WAY OFF BASE on this, but for the chorus, have you thought about adding some harmony backing vocals to it, not just doubling the lead vocal? Somehow or another, I hear a 5th Dimension “Aquarius” vibe to the chorus, if you want to take the risk…
-Danny
Quote: (spreadercraig @ Nov. 07 2010, 9:39 AM)
Thank Bill
Jeremy, the link to the first song is the original one on page one....sorry.
The link you heard is for the other song I'd like you guys to take a look at....two songs all in all that I've ended up mixing
Anyone But Me: http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=9843194
Jokes On You:
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=9848492
Cheers
Craig
Now this second one....
The drums are like they are in a different room or something...and they drop too low during the verses, I wouldn't bring the entire track up just the drums on verses.
What a mean by different room is the guitar is sort of grungy in your face even the bass is sort of edgy, but the drums are just too studio clean to go with it, we need grit here, IMHO.
keep shinin
jerm
Appoint a Producer and supply just ONE Steering Wheel…
Open n-Track delay plug, with one kick back and adjust the delay time to 1/2 the tempo…
?
or…
to taste…
Pan the Kicks left-and-right for starters…
That’ll give the Vox’s some edge…
Anyway,
Bill…
That’s what I would do… BUT… Don’t listen at me… CARE F U L… OX…
Heh - listen to all of us and it will be the proverbial camel… 
lmfao Tom!