I wanna write like Craig!

:smiley:

“Fooled Again”:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands…t=music
:whistle:

Good job Tom! :agree:

Don’t we all!

Nice tune and tracks as usual Tom!

Dat one’s on me station, I LIKES! :)

OK, I added a tambourine and a bit of organ toward the end. seemed like it needed it. Now you all have to listen again. Hmm…I just had an idea…

Tom,

That’s a great song man! Only two small comments, I would love to hear a stronger bass line, it’s such a rythmic song. And, it’s too short…I was really into the song when it finished :)

You’re a great and prolific songwriter. You write a lot of good songs and some real gems, this could be one of the gems.

Ian

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Topic: I wanna write like Craig!, :D


don't we all?

I really like the song, love the opening guitar. It'd sound good with a slightly more 'bubbly' bass (If i'm picky that is...) but it really is great as it is.

(after thought... I did feel it just kinda 'drops off' at the end, Kinda like it needs a more 'explosive' ending? ??? )


Ange x

Who’s Craig?

Top class this Tom. Remeniscent of John Lennons ‘Oh Yoko’ chord structure. Then your cool indie voice kicks in.

Well done!

I believe that this is Craig, but it’s just an inductive inference:

Nah… that’s only a photograph of the physical representation of “Craig”. We don’t really KNOW who’s in there…

D

I don’t even know who’s in there :laugh:

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I don't even know who's in there
:laugh:

Is there anybody in there? :whistle:

I wanna write like Burt Bacharach! :)

70+ Top 40 hits in the US… 40+ Top 40 hits in the UK…

I could probably live off his royalty checks…

D

Don’t forget Burt in the Geico commercial.

Burt Bacharach Geico commercial

Heh-heh… yeah… I bet he got paid more for that one commercial than I’ll make in several YEARS.

D

I’d like to write like Leonard Cohen.

Never heard of 'im… :p

D

Well if we get to pick - Irving Berlin

After reading the bassline comments & listening on my laptop where the bass is not audible, I just had to make up my own bassline. I’ll check out the original later :laugh: