not that kind of feedback
Greeting everyone, my name is matt and i am new to this forum, i have visited a few times to get some help and i must say that all of you have been very helpful, and not that i am registered once agian i need your help, although the following music i am posting up here is punk and may not be you first choice in listening i am simply requesting feedback and opinions on what i have written and recorded, so thank you for any feedback you can provide
try this one first its better on your ears
Two Weeks
214
Motis Operendi
The Night Before
Midnite messages
once again thank you for the feedback, let me know you think
matt
www.anotherloss4words.com
i was really hoping for some feedback here but i guess not
The vocals are very harmonic and excellent, the song as a composition is very good, but the guitar player uses a lot of rock type chords on an acoustic guitar, especially in the intro. An acoustic guitar does not sound at its best with these types of chords.
Great piece of song writing, loose the intro and use some chords better suited to the acoustic guitar.
Guy
thanks for the feedback guy, i appreciate it greatly, i will sit down and try to work out a new intro, my band actually plays this song electric too and it works out well that way but i will reword the acoustic version