New Song Master...

No title or lyrics for this yet, just the music…

Demo 2

I liked the lead break. :)

*PS-
I forgot to mention if you are open to suggestions, mine would be to scale back some of the parts…maybe have a buildup and break down…a part with just keys…or have the beat stop, or just rhythm guitar…

keep shinin

jerm
:cool:

I think thats got a lot of potential danny. I liked the organ underpinning the whole thing.
The mix seemed clearer this time than preveous songs of yours.
Exciting lead break aswel! Look forward to hearing the finished article

Tina

AaHh…
Just .02 worth…



Let the lyrics decide how the part’s dynamics
come-and-go as the song progresses…
Yea got all the tracks to create a re-mix or even re-track some of the backing-and-fills…


Your n-Track v3.2 and P-4 machine-and-audio hardware, is working pretty nice…



Bill…