poppa willis - critique new song please

pw, this guy could benefit from your wordsmith experience. please comment.



missed a couple of days over there Don - I’ll go check it out.
Thanks for the heads up. I need to be more active at that forum.

Hmmmm - for his first ever Country song it’s honestly not that bad Don.
Could use some polish. We’ll see how he reacts.

Now you jerkin’ me around or what? heheeee :D