Should I (critique please) need fresh ears

n-Track Studio music
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Need a fresh set of ears for critque.
Thanks
Bill

http://www.musicianscollaboration.com/forum…ch=8117

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Quote: (rockin4themaster @ Dec. 16 2007, 5:12 AM)

Need a fresh set of ears for critque.
Thanks
Bill

http://www.musicianscollaboration.com/forum....ch=8117

Bill, we can't listening without registering on the site where you've posted the file. Is there somewhere else you could post the song?
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Same problem here :(

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Opps Sorry! Thy this one.
http://www.soundclick.com/player…93&q=hi

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Here is the Soundclick page. The song is "Should I"

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=321108

thanks

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Nice song Bill,

The vocals and harmonies are great. Some very nice guitar breaks, especially around 2.20’. The only thing I would be tempted to tweak is the mix on the drums, playing is absolutely fine but the cymbals are a little in your face in the verse, and the snare is a little indistict by comparison. But that’s just a personal and very humble opinion :) Of course the ultimate test is listening in the car :laugh:
Good stuff!
Ian

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I agree with Bruffie on the mix.

I would like to hear the vocal “fattened” up a little on the verses. Just a matter of personal preference though. Nice tune!

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Thanks for the listen and comments. I am in the process of tweaking the drums. I agree… the hats especially are very hot. I’ll play with the vox a bit too.

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Great tune and playing. Singing is excellent, more in the mix please.
All cymbals are a little too hot I think, kick and snare sorta lost in mix maybe, then again I could be wrong.
Good work!

Yaz

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Thanks Yaz.
Still working on mix.

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Hi Bill,

Excellent work as ever my friend. Just keep doing whatever it is you are doing.


Mark

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Thanks Mark