The Lizards' Gizzard

Hello, I am new to the forum
I have been using n - Track 6 for a little while now, am a beginner with recording…loving n Track but still have a lot to learn

Anyways, I thought I might post a song and am looking for all constructive criticism…

Thanks

http://snd.sc/PWPqIB

While I’m still here, I suppose I should try posting the link :;):

Sounds good. Just a thought, I think that 2nd random voice would sound more trippy if you panned it one time on the left and suddenly on the right. Just an opinion, it sounds good anyhow.

http://soundcloud.com/gilbert-betancourt/gilbert-betancourt-texture

Check mine out too if you would, just a demo of something…any feedback would be great.

One organ shy of truly replicating The Doors’ sound.