Remixed or Mastered, here's YKIMS improved

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Remixed or Mastered, here’s YKIMS improv

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Remixed or Mastered, here’s YKIMS improved

http://web-tiger.net~guycom/YKIMS.wma

or

http://ntrack.mysite.freeserve.com/YKIMS.wma

Any feedback gratefully appreciated.

Guy

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Hey Guy
From a technical standpoint, the mix sounds really clean. The placement of instruments is nice. The only thing I would like to hear is some kind of change within the progression. Maybe the bass could walk down to the change, since it is a pretty prominent part of the song. Something like 4 measures or so, in the middle, just to break it up a little. Other than that, it’s smokin’ :)
Jeromee

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I also think the mix has improved and I’m in full agreement about a 4 bar break being needed, I’m just waiting for some inspiration.

Thanks

Guy

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As Tom Petty said “The waiting is the hardest part” :D