Gave me heart-burn… Oh wait. Sorry, that was the coffee! 
Sounds nice on the lappy top, tin can speakers PW. I’ll listen better at home. Sounds like a pretty cool worship ballad could be lurking. 
You da’ may-unn!
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Remember that idea I had for a Prayer CD Tim - this could be the start.
Then again Bruffie might listen and write an awesome lonesome tune! Who knows?
Remember that idea I had for a Prayer CD Tim - this could be the start.
Then again Bruffie might listen and write an awesome lonesome tune! Who knows?
Yah... That Bruffie... he's a heckuva wordsmith. I wish lyrics would come to me with such apparent ease. Oh well...
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I’m hearing a Harry Nilsson type ballad or lullaby.
I have no thoughts on what kind of a song it may turn into, but I like where it’s going. I like picking around on things that have a lazy three-four beat, so sending you a track or two later in the weekend is a definite possibility.
hmmm - ya’ll are on it - cool 
Hey Poppa,
Such a nice laid back feel. Love the stop at 1.30. Really like the direction it’s going. Could be a winner!
Do you mind if I have a play with some lyrics here please popps?
Ange x
I would be honored to share with you Angela Mary Hardy (soon Swan).
I did a rough melody idea that I didn’t post a link to Ange. If it’s no where near what you were hearing that’s fine too.
Melody rough for “home”
It is not hugely different from what I had in mind, but I was gonna hold the first note for that first phrase and then do much what you did on the rest.
Have you any particular Theme/story in mind? I saw that you called it home and the picture of the power of prayer, so I was hearing it as a worship song, were you thinking of your home on earth or in heaven? or shall I just have a go and see what comes out?
Ange x
I was thinking eternal home. How He said “I go to prepare a place for you.”
Personal perfection in Him - what is that going to be like? No pain, no fear, perfect un-cluttered communion with Him as the Spirit being I really am… I’ll only know "When I get home."
That sorta thing… but you do what you hear and feel.
…not getting anything yet, I think that I was too far off what you had imagined with where I had taken it in my mind, had written a verse but it was more on prayer and worship…don’t think it was what you were looking for. I think it is a beautiful song though and I think it will be even prettier with the right lyrics. sorry I blew out 
Ange x
Write it ! make it yours!